Feedback on Data Analysis

Hi all
The link below takes you to Bron's feedback for my data analysis. I have taken her comments on board and will adjust the final report accordingly. (I had already done some of what she said already as I've already started doing the final plan, but will change some other parts for Assignment 4.

http://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=0ARpw4K3nyVioZGhwOGhtYjJfMmdzenE4ZGNq&hl=en

Thanks also to Joy for giving me great feedback too.